Biker's Lily{Wolves MC 2}

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-Writing Quality-I do not believe you are a native English speaker, you're doing well so far with the writing portion; However, in concern to the quality, I do believe it could use some improvement. Author, you're making grammatical errors even some 2nd graders ( Begging of Elementary School) do not make, even so, these are small mistakes that lead to larger issues. Better to clip them at the source and fix them early on, they're just relatively small mistakes, only there are a bunch of them.-Stability of Updates-It is far too soon to right on this, but from what I surmise, the updates are regularly implemented into the list. This is decent, it is good to  have frequent updates. In comparison, do not "blow your steam

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It's so cool to see Terraria come to life in an adaptation like this. I've always thought about how cool it would be to see a story around the sufferings in Terraria and this does it pretty well. Some parts of the story could be more fleshed out but it is entertaining nonetheless. Worth reading.

AMAZING !! I just read two chapters and I was in !! The plot is very intriguing and engaging. Really loved the progression of the story !! Keep up the work !I am eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters !!

Its a great comedy.You should write more chapters, while sometimes the story is a litlle weird its that that males this story so fun.__________________________________________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------so im waiting for more chapters

It was pointless and was happy to be let out when they arrived at the destination he was meeting Ebony.

The sound of Ichigo's alarm fills the air in his room causing him to sit straight up and look around his room trying to figure out where he was. After two minutes he finally cut off the alarm and continue to look around before he spoke to himself.