Truthfully, Henri really didnt have the time or will to go to school. She could read a few languages well enough to get by and that was enough for her. She didnt plan out the later half of her life, she actually doubted that she'd make it to live that long anyway.
I am delighted that for all those who still waits and support this. Please do be assured that I won't be dropping this story and so my other ones, but it would be slow to update. Which sucks, I know as I am a reader too before even a writer. So I won't be that surprised if a lot of you stopped reading this, but I am still thankful for you guys staying this far.
"You know, Raven, Summer cares for Yang like her own. But she isn't trying to take your place. Yang recognized the difference. I was there when she asked why her baby sister looked like Summer, but not her."
Pretty interesting so far, I curious to see what other ways there are the get stronger. I excited about the progression with other characters as well, maybe a bit more use of his magic to increase his rate of physical improvement.
The story is alright, but there are a few things that caused the lower score. First, the inconsistencies with Character names. There have been several times where the Name Melissa takes over a character like a virus, and it's rather irritating when it happens.Next is the strangely disjointed feeling timeline. There are several instances where it seems that only hours have passed yet at the same time feels like weeks have. It can be hard to keep track of exactly how long has passed.Third issue I would point out is how Shallow character interaction and relationships appear to be. Some characters play a role and then seemingly vanish never to be heard from again. Overall, it's an OK read so far but it's not a story I can rate highly. Good concept, ok execution. There just isn't enough refinement, consistency, or depth to rate it higher.
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