Between The Dead

Recently started reading this and up to chapter 50. Fantastic storyline with very well-developed characters that I eagerly look forward to learning more about as they progress. Great mix of adventure, game play, and humor. Keep ‘em coming - Can’t wait to see what happens next.

Wow. I was surprised. This novel really help my understanding on my cultivation.I will be braeking through another level.Praise this mortal authors insight and genius.Hope my immortal brothers read this

Easily the best book I have read in a long time. Enough of the crybaby MCs and more like this!!!!!! Please keep the chapters coming. Roll them out lol

Another Review from the Author. This time this is not as shameless as the first one since I will address complaints the readers pointed out. I know everyone wouldn't be pleased by this work of mine, however before going in, please read this first.This novel is written in First Person Perspective and with only one perspective which is the MC's.So everything you will be reading here were all taken from the MC's own eyes. His thoughts, what he experienced, everything. He's the source.I also took it upon myself to write while keeping in mind not to self-project myself in the novel. His thinking will all stem from the 16-year old mind who because of a sudden increase in clarity or intelligence or anything you could call it, tends to overthink most of the time. And well, there's also his adaptability so he won't react as you expected on something where one should start asking questions or be surprised instead he will fall into his overthinking habit.This is where the first complaint will be addressed.'I am weak.' You will be seeing him thinking like this at the earlier parts of the story. He's an overthinker and whenever something happened that's out of his grasp, he will immediately lean on that thought.Of course along the way he will outgrew that thought but yeah, some dropped this before that happened. He started from the bottom and I wanted to show what's going on inside his mind so his mindset at the earlier chapters will stay like that.For the second and third complaints, the Harem and the Side-characters . This is clearly tagged as a harem novel so expect the harem members will be introduced.'They were introduced but there's no substance in them. What are they thinking? Why did they do that? Why did they fall for him? etc.'As this is a FPP novel, of course, you wouldn't be privy to what the other characters in the novel are thinking most of the time. That's unless they pointed it out or explained it themselves. Though they're introduced, the times they interact with the MC were all situational and most of the time their real thoughts were still not showing on the surface. They're all moving and thinking by themselves in the background even without the MC looking at them, so the next time they will show up in his perspective, bits of pieces of what they're thinking and their personality will be exposed.I used this kind of writing on my first novel as well, slowly unraveling the personalities of the characters introduced. But since some of the characters will be left behind on their worlds and it's still unsure when they will show up again, they will feel flat.I understand that point but that's just how it is. Characters will not immediately open up to him but as their interaction with each other increased, you'll see the sides of them that's not shown during the first time they were introduced.'Not detailed enough. The description is too bland.'As this is something even I am not confident at. You will feel that his environment were not described properly. I suck at describing things and people but I'm trying to improve it through continuous writing and reading.I think this is everything. For the typo and grammatical errors, I can only ask you readers to point it out for me to fix. I only use Grammarly and Docs to correct the mistakes and surely they're not perfect.If I still missed a point that you feel like its a blunder of the novel, feel free to comment it below and I will answer them to the best of my understanding of my own work.Thanks for reading. :)

as of chapter 12 being released it seems pretty good, but as there aren't enough chapters for a full review i will just say that it is quite good.

Kuro's eyes widened at the sight of her large, innocent smile. He couldn't deny that for a human she was beautiful, one could even mistake her for a celestial being if only she had a completely pure heart, but of course that's impossible for humans.

"sreeeeeettt.".."de, keluar makan dulu yuk!." Kata kakaku. "hemmm..(sambil menatap)." Jawabku yang tidak bisa menjawab dan hanya bisa menatap. "ayok, makan sama sama, sama ayah sama kakak, jangan murung terus, nanti ibu sedih" kata kakaku sambil tangan nya menggandeng dan sedikit menarik tubuhku agar bangun dari duduk diam ku diatas ranjang.Aku pun ikut tanpa menjawab yang berarti meng iyakan ajakan dari kakak ku.

Huh! Look like the window was left open after cleaning. It is quite chilly at night so be sure to close it at night otherwise you may catch a cold and if you need anything else you can ask me, OK?"