Betting on the Jackal

please let him go for your own happiness and make him regret

I think the novel is very good and upon a read, the story is very different but I think the synopsis makes this story just look like a copy of the Hitting Zone and well they have similar premises they are executed differently so I when you read the synopsis just give it a chance.

Idk, I like the idea of the book. However, I just find it really annoying that random ass people just come up to his place and take stuff etc etc. Like idk it's like these people do nothing and just take things from his place... I just find this so fcking annoying. For me, the mc HAS to have some self-respect about himself. There is being kind and then there is grovelling to others, letting them walk all over you etc. This is what the mc is in this book and it is something I cannot stand reading about. Like I don't mind that people come to his place, maybe get to look at stuff etc but to actively take things without even doing anything? That's over the line, there's a difference to looking around admiring compared to taking things. It's like inviting someone to your house and them just taking things from it... Nah, can't stand that. the mc also has to have certain self-respect, some confidence about that he lacks. Hope this makes sense? Just something I want to read about when reading so yeah. My prefrence rly

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a good story and storyline but the needs to finish the novel seen many good novel that is not finished always please finish the novel and just write at your own pace

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