don't overcomplicate sentences, make it simple if you can. i want to read novel, not study journal. it's uncomfortable to read. i just skim through the chapter. 10 chaps is all i can do. the first few chapters are good, it gone downhill after mc transmigration(?) to the past, i don't know why, i just lost the will to read the rest, it's just felt uncomfortable to read.it has good potential. my advice is, let your friend read it first before posting it in WN
To be honest, once I saw the title I labeled it as one of those transmigration young person with cheats, but once I saw the synopsis where the protagonist gets old? Interesting indeed . . . with a system too . . .
what I really like about this book is that the MC is not unique on it's own and he is not the only one with system or the only one who was transmigrated
The story is definitely interesting, I enjoyed reading it. A few minor no big deal errors but its easily overlooked since the story is really interesting. continue the great work !
She has an authoritative manner that at times is almost arrogant. I watched the interview and hought he seemed quite arrogant. He manages to exude confidence without being arrogant. Like a lot of hospital consultants, he terrifies his patients with his arrogant manner. If I say I'm a leading economic expert, won't that sound rather arrogant? Thesaurus: synonyms and related words
Oh so close! I thought he was going to use his reality marble. But at least he used the first two verses. It's always so epic! On the other hand, Shirou's finally manning up. My only question is: who are the harem members? 🤔
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