She should not but I bet she will. All these stories are the same. The weak wife return to the asshole husband. I have not read the story but I wish there was a story where the woman would move on and let the cheater hang dry!
**HONEST REVIEW FROM A REAL READER**Hey Everyone, Just thought I'd leave my review here now that I (as a reader) have read more than 143 chapters. I believe my review will be a lot more insightful than people who have only read it for 20 or so chapters.First of all**GENERAL OVERVIEW** TLDR [for those looking to skim]: This novel is quite like your MMORPG novels. However, for those who like this genre this novel ticks all the boxes. The main character is resourceful and knows how to use opportunities from past experience to create a good head-start. He has good values and is not forceful of his opinion on others and values relationships. The damage and stat numbers are also quite balanced and I must say the class structure towards an Alchemist is very interesting and is not what you expect from a typical alchemist with those skills that Ren (The MC) Has. *PROS* :* Character Development:Ren and the people around him all have a good backstory to them. They are all connected and the good thing is that there are chapters which does not just focus on Ren only where we are allowed to look into other people's perspectives and their own respective journeys.* Abilities and their UsageThe abilities that the author has come up with is definitely interesting. I would say they are the reason why I was hooked and continued to read. I really enjoy the abilities the author has created for Ren as they are very unique and have not been seen before. The way he uses the abilities are also quite planned out which adds more to the novel's flavor. *Side characters involvement and storiesThis is one of the best aspect of this novel: You get to understand the side characters who follow the MC that aren't just robots who are discarded later on once MC is oh so strong. They help out and their background is solid enough for you to expect them to be of help. *CONS* : * World Building [this one isn't too much of a con]So far it is not bad as the world of the novel is quite thoroughly explained and the back and forth between in real life and in game is interesting. It shows a good contrast BUT now even 143 chapters into the novel, the world building is not too clear and the direction for the future needs to be more fleshed out to create a higher sense of anticipation* Grammar and WritingThis one is slightly ick-y. There are quite a number of grammatical mistakes which affects the flow of the chapter. This is evident in most of the novels here on Webnovel. However, 'MMORPG Rebirth as an Alchemist' have more of these errors and I understand that the author is looking for an editor. It is not absolutely terrible and is to be honest decent but does create a jarring sensation.Depth and Gravity of the Challenges/Plot:This con has nothing to do with how Ren fights his enemies or how the author describes the fight scenes. They are all good from what I've read. What I mean with this con is that, there needs to be a linkage between what Ren does and what he's going to do. How well he utilizes his rewards to better himself or his future self. Furthermore, there is a lack of details towards a future goal or emphasis on what is to go from a certain point from X to Y. For example: (not a spoiler as this doesn't happen in the novel - just for examples sake)Ren kills a snake dungeon boss and receives a scepter of magic water that is superior to any weapon in the game. There needs to be an internal thought dilemma as to whether he utilizes it for himself, saves it for a future team partner, sells for money to help his family or himself, blueprint it, or use it as an extended quest line.What I am trying to say is deepen the plot with each plot that appears and show how they can link with each other and to be more detailed with certain events so that readers can expect the unexpected. Thank you <3 :D
everything happens so quickly I don't even know where this is heading to HAHAHAHAHAHAH also the naming the shadow wolf in the start has a name until later he only calls it shadow wolf same with the others like the names of the gryphons there r 2 gryphons male and female named Xiao Jin and Xiao yin (correct me if I'm wrong), when he breeds the 100 gryphon legion there is one baby platinum grade which he named Xiao Jin I think which supposedly from the adult male but it says it's from the female one, then the female one became nameless which "it doesn't matter" cuz for the female gryphon it's fine because of the grade of the baby male which is higher than the female, see even I who is writing this review isn't even sure if they understand my explanation HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I know it's cuz of my grammar but please fix the naming it's kinda annoying on figuring out who is who if u kept changing the names HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
Guys, this novel is freakin.. Awesome. You should read. 1)great story development(although I am very sad that the girl which he loves leaves him and other one was taken by some other girl Zhong Xiu(truly deserving of his love) from another world)2) character design is mind blowing .befitting to character description.3) you'll be filled with the mystery of his dreamland and you'll be bound to read the novel to uncover so many other mysteries too.4)last but not the least ~~ you'll never get bored and will be enjoying as the novel continues.
Genuinly good cultivation story. The game elements are almost not there. Its like MC has reality and extra life in paralel universe where he can respawn after death and learn how to cultivate in reality.I read the novel to the evd in raws and it was good untill last chapter but... I did not realize it was last chapter untill I read authors finishing words. For me it felt like novel was cut off on 3/4 and left unfinished.
The novel is only so-so. There are flaws with logic and overall there's no depth. Just gain a system and become cocky overnight. He was so desperate before obtaining it... and is still stupid after obtaining it.
A good novel. I like the world setting and especially the character development. I also like the flow of the story, which isn't too detailed, nr too quick in progression.Keep up the good work!
A good read, i enjoyed all of the chapters and always looked forward to more. The only thing i can complain about is the lack of chapters xD, give me more!!!
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