The author is stretching the sub-plotline too much. It takes 10 chapters just for one fight and the end of that fight was just disappointing. It's been 100 chapters and MC is still baby! And not to mention till now 90% of the story is about how humans send army and MC annihilate them with his cheats they again send bigger army MC again annihilate them with his cheats but his sister get injured so the author spends another 50 chapters where MC goes on a journey to find some type of flower for his sister.The story is very very slow, fill with pointless sub-plot
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Listen I like this type of novel and all, but even the characters' first blueprint was the same... it's just another copy of a popular web novel. listen if you're an author it shouldn't be too hard to just take ideas from the book, but just don't copy it.
The story is good. Hope the best for the novel.. Author san... Cayok2... Gambatee... Love to read more.ππππππππππππππππ
Hey guys as you can see this is pretty much unlike the other books and has a different tone and different style to it. Now you may or may not like it but I would say give it a try
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