Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.I wrote a novel recently, which isReincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa
I like it, like it, like it! That's all I can say. From the first chapter this story has captured my heart, and I'll gladly continue reading it! Characters are very three-dimensional, some you can sympathize with, some not. The world background is seriously cool, if not a little dark, but that's the charm that enraptured me. To be honest, the first chapter felt like a delusional dream, and I loved it! I want more!
The story is pretty awesome and interesting up till know...I like how the protagonist is "very" strong in the beginning and has comparing material to one of the top beings on the "planet". I also like how the story is different from the "real" Harry Potter and gives a complete knew view of things and aspects. It is easy to read and most importantly: fun to read. I read the original so the hopes are quite hight. The story was easy to follow, but if one didn't read Harry Potter, some points might be not so easy to understand or they have just forgotten. Therefore I suggest that you, take over the author way by adding explanations. My biggest hope and wish is that you would write the story to the end and keep it interesting.
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