it's a mesmerizing world! im glad you're sharing a story native to you and not seen much before for a lot of us here and it's interesting to see the different view on witches. though a lot of sentences could be cut down or actually split with punctuation. overall good job!
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Very good novel. It is an enjoyable and honest reading without any pretention. Similar to other cultivation works, the author amazingly made it his. With originality in his style and the delivery of the contents. It keeps getting better with time like a fine wine. There is no filling unlike many novel up there, each word has it purpose. At the end of a chapter, instead of being like : "That's it ? But what just happened ? The MC just moved one foot and that's all ?
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Extremely great work done by the author. The intensive plots and chenistu is sculpted in a brilliant way. A book recommended to everyone interested in such adventurous genres!
1.4star for writing ,little grammatical mistakes. 2.4star Nothing much to see for development in 10 chapters3.1star Here comes the system, reading every line is so painful that I have equipped myself with large what ofH2O4..4star fine5.4stars Ever watch the show The Boys, it's 70℅same
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