I like the story (I have read 130+ chapters) but there are two things that I don’t like and those are the long and unnecessary descriptions and the grammar. But at least the grammer is nothing major (at least the author does not confuse he and her pronouns). If minor grammar mistakes and long descriptions don’t bother you then you should give the story a try.
When you write a bunch of chapters that was free to read then later on put it into another platform to have to pay to read them is disappointing. If you needed money you could have made paetron or another donation place.
Well the idea of the story is good. But development of relationships in this novel is slow, so if you can handle the fact that mc the supposed s*x god after 50 chapters just get 2 Harem members then try this one, but dont worry author himself told us after this he will increase the speed of mc for gaining new harem members.
Take it all. All my power stones are reserved for you. Even if it's only one. Author, you have my heart, my souls my eyes, and my everything~everything~You are my everything. Hashtag, I am straight.
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Finally found something good after reading a few light novels with bad grammar and low writing skills. Keep the good work up. I recommend this to every game lover as well as none lovers.
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