Beast Synthesis: I Bonded with Two S-Ranked Beasts

The concept seems intresting and we are given the power structure right from the start, making it easy to understand. The language is simple so one won't get lost easily and need to look up a dictionary either.Over all a good read to add to your daily routine.

Interesting story. First off, I'd like to say that I like all the large paragrpahs you have. Never a detail missed. There are a lot of competing ideas, and as a writer who loves mixing different medias into his books, I really enjoyed that part.Good job so far!

Not sure why kakashi hatake likes it so much and did master Jeriahufffc really write this if he did write it why doesn’t it say so also naruto could use this book and saskue also sai and probably choji Where all my naruto fans at

This is an interesting story. It's dark and does not fit to everyone's taste. I will not spoil the story but here is my take:The scenes are well described and the story is engaging to read. I can really sense and feel the character's reaction and emotions reading the story. It's really a dark start and I can tell the reader had invested in the story itself.I am giving this story an overall perfect 5.0 for its potential. I can see the writer did a good job. Keep writing, you have done well!

"Magos?"

"You have one too?!" he said as he looked at Emy's lap which had a small white fox with blue flames on each of its two tails next two her.

Suddenly a hole appeared in the blood-filled sky as an ominous object could be seen leaving.

- [Uzumaki Clan] – 100,000 DP