The chapters are really well written.I like this story a lot. The pace of the story is very well balanced nor it is slow neither it is fast. The story is based on mcu universe ( my guess could be wrong) from the hint provided in chapters and maybe the author extend it on its own imagination ( I don't mind if he/she did) .
To be honest, the start of the novel was not so good...the vocabulary needs improvement too, dialogues didn't looked good...in the first two chapters, it still hasn't explained what is going on. Who is the mc? what is Mythical Realms π? I might die out of suspense. On top of that, character introduction n design was not so good. Respected Author, you need to work on that too. some scenes are not explained well...in short, the work is done in an effortless manner. It needs re-editing so that it can show some great work which our author shown in previous novel lol. I hope author is not joking with us by presenting such novel with his current skills lol. I'm expecting great results in future. Hope you edit it soon π
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Well, let me start from the top.There isnβt really any character designs. The Author will give a brief description of the characters, like, βsheβs cuteβ, or, βshe has long black hairβ, but thatβs about as desciptive as they get.at the same time, not much information is given about the world the MC is in, the Author has made some passing comments about it, like, βthese are the highest martial artist levelsβ, or like, βthere are city masters, and these are how many cities there are in this kingdomβ, but again, thatβs about as descriptive as they get. The story is kind of only centered around the MC and his thinking and goals, it doesnβt branch off to much else.Iβm fairly new to the novel so I donβt know about the update stability, but it seems to be pretty good.Now, on to the reaso. Iβm dropping this novel. I have a personal policy and preference that I will not back out on or change ever. No cucking the MC. Especially if itβs a harem novel. I donβt put up with it. And in case anyone whoβs read the novel comes after me, yes, based on what I have read so far, the MC will get cucked. And willingly. For those who will be confused, the MC has stated as of, I believe chapter 15, that he would be perfectly willing, and even happy to get cucked by his own daughters. In case you donβt know, Yuri is when a female has s3xual relations with another female. When this happens in a male centered harem, which means, when the male is the head of house, and he has a harem of females who he is an intimate relationship with. Anyways, when this happens in that kind of relationship, the MC is being cheated on, by his women, with his own women. And this particular MC, is willing and even happy if this were to happen. I draw the line on this action. Yuri is nothing more than the MC being cucked by his own harem, thus, being cheated on, by his own women. Line drawn. Novel dropped.
It's a really good read. The fact that it's completely free and contains almost 500 chapters is an even bigger bonus. The world-building is a strong point, and the egocentric and frankly "villainous" character of the main character adds to the originality of the story. Some narrative devices may be a little overused, but overall it's good. I hope this story won't be abandoned, good luck autor!
It's quite lengthy and will take patience to read. But its really in-depth with great action and a great MC. Something that I love about the MC is that she isn't the typical beauty. She is rather a gravelly older woman who is smart and a introvert that his smart and witty. but it stays entertaining. and despite being detailed and long, it is very easy to read.
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