Back to the 70s: The Beautiful Woman Went to the Countryside to Seduce the Pure and Innocent Man

very idiotic story with no element of reality. Those foolish readers who think the mc is awesome or something let me tell you a fact: if this sort of mc exists in real life then that person will be drowned in spit by everyone he meets.

Personal preference but the MC is insufferable most of the times. interesting concept with the weapon catalog. out of the blue forging apprentices go from slaves, to competition to the deciding factor of the ownership of two territories in a war between two empires, to deciding the fate of the 10 empires in the story. basically the importance of the MCs skills fluctuate based on when the author needs it to.

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i think that this novel have a great potential, if it will be pick up, then we will test it and see,  i hope we can test this novel  :)     

Waiting for an update.........................................................................................................................................

I really like the story so far its a really fresh approach to have a relationship between the mc and spirit beast that are well written as well. If i have anything that iam not so found of in the story its that sometimes the enemys are doing something that the mc is expecting and planning against when there is no bevor given hint to that. But that isnt really a dealbreaker.

Another shameless review form me, the author. Idk if this actually helps with reach, but I hope it does. I won't actually be reviewing my own story since it would be most likely biased. Hope you have fun time reading this story! <3

good story but just dont repeat the gender bender thing like you did with another of your novel. you are such a talent interm of writing fun story learn from your mistakes bro i can see you  rise all the way to the top