BACK OF MY HAND-Paige Bueckers

This feels like a meh version of “I get stronger the more I eat”. Definitely not as gruesome as IGSTMIE, but also not as intriguing. It lacks the pull. It seems very cookie cutter without anything to spice it up.

this is great and I love it, I hope author doesn't run out of ideas and add unnecessary stuff like a harem or romance, or maybe make modifs to to the system(this one might be necessary depending)

author i think you should check the chapter after writing .there are full of mistakes we don't even know what is happening in the story because of the mistakes.i think you should check before updating the chapters.author you want to give your attention more for correcting the mistakes rather than the updating of the chapter  .any one can tell me where I can read the novel without mistakes and the raw name of the novel .

bad writing waste of timethe story has so much bs mc provoked enemy blabbering,repeatmc does nothing waste of chapterdon't read this u will get brain damage

Pretty good so far. I have read it all yet but it definitely grabbing my attention. The overall for it is better then some others that I have read. Keep at it.

Eh... I just voted in the wrong place (your old link) :(The cover page is absolutely stunning!  The story is great, The plot is interesting and your characters are expressive. You're doing well!I wish you endless inspiration and a lot of good ideas!

The story is well developed and arouse one interest. it is very stimulating. I think the introduction should have been too snappy to keep the narrative flowing because some people or a person like me could eadily be discouraged if the information in the introduction part is not well articulated .

Hey, It would mean so much if you could read my short story and give it quick review and let me know what you think. :)I an aspiring writer/author and would really appreciate some feedback, so i could possibly write more stories or novels.