Birds sang tranquilly, their chirps echoing along the homestead's large property. Resting within that property, a worn barn creaked and groaned with each blow of wind that bounced off its walls. Breaking through the sounds of nature, two voices could be heard from within the barn.
I'd recommend reading this. The start is a bit shaky, but overall it's still enjoyable. Of course, there are still problems with the novel, but I think they are minor enough to ignore.Here are some of my personal things that I find could have been done better. 1. The world is building. I believe the world building had so much more potential. It's not bad, but it could have been way better, I think.2. The age of the characters. No matter how much I try and imagine it, a bunch of 16-year-olds trying to save the world is ridiculous. Well, this is not much of a problem, but it just felt like that one itch you can't reach.3. Honestly, the relationships. At one point, they are extremely fickle, but the next, they are so absurdly complicated that you question why they even began. MC and Maria had a good relationship until Succubus had to come in and ruin it. I'm scared my ship might sink.4. The fights. They were good, but speed was never mentioned, so I always found myself struggling to imagine them properly.As I said, these are my personal problems, and I don't think many people will have a problem with them. Anyway, all in all, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for all the hard work, author, and thanks for the enjoyable novel. I'm going to continue reading this.
so far, as this is a new story I do not see any official character designs, nor are there enough chapters to rate it on 'stability of updates' but this novel feels authentic, like there is a REAL passion behind this writer and their story, Congrats on your first 1k views :)
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