I enjoy the concept of the novel, it's a different type of kingdom building. I also enjoy most of the character building.The only problem is the MC which is a Moronic Spineless Coward, which makes it for a hard read
I know there are 3 or 4 novels here with similar plot but this one is the best. I don't care if it's original or a copy. The writing quality is just great. Please, pick it up. There is no need to waste time on translating sign-up novels that are already translated, like Buddha Palm
This needs an editor. The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low. Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students.Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.
A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
Overall I believe this is a genuinely good novel.The world building is done wonderfully and we come to learn more and more about what we need to know in due time.This brings me to the pacing of the story which is just right in my opinion neither too fast or too slow. The story is progressing well and through the story you'll come to know many sorts of people with their strengths and flows. They each have their way of life which makes them unique on their own. And due to that very reason their actions are very often linked to their vision and or prejudices. They are put in a situation where they are forced to grow in order to survive and through those events subtle change can be seen in the way they deals with whatever comes to them. World building, this novel takes place in a fantasy like Earth in the future following a first apocalypse and a virus that shift humans into monster. Humanity now lives mainly during the day as danger lurk during the night. A new world order is put in place where the population is dispatched into districts that basically are the remaining secure cities out there.Technology has gone through plenty breakthrough and is able to do quite a lot especially with the addition of magic or sorcery.I won't say much about grammar as i myself aren't that good in English but i can at least say that the author wrote the story in a way that makes it easy to understand what is going on. Now as for now i'd like to say first thank you for this enjoyable novel I believe that your work only needs more exposure to soar high. Secondly even if I didn't manage to point out things where you could improve I'm certain there is always a way to improvement and as such your story can only get better from now on if you continue the way you do. Hope this would help some to give some the push to read this work and the author the faith that his efforts hasn't gone unnoticed.
I am looking forward for this Novel's success.I also feel that this Novel has deep conspiracy hidden inside it.So, to unveil this mystery, we have to read this.Hmmmmm, Lets go read this novel guys. 😅😂📖
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