This is my first horror novel ever since I have started reading since 2 years ago and it's the best novel thus so far....Plot development is nice and steady there are only 2-3 boring chapter so far but so far it's like sitting in the edge of the chair....And it is highly recommend to those who wanted to enjoy this feeling read this cnovel at night time 😇😇 you will surely love this feeling.....👻👻👻
This is good. Story’s good. Like, really good. Really good storytelling. The characters are more than just outlines personality. Except for some parody characters. It’s all just pretty neat. So all in all, pretty good.
Especially in the beginning of the novella, let's say the first 50-60 chapters, the writing style was very dry, you could tell that you had no experience. I even wondered if it wasn't generated by artificial intelligence. After that, an undertone began to appear in your writing. But you keep using the main character's name every other sentence...which is very annoying. Use synonyms, speak for him and not in the 3rd person.. there are many options to avoid this annoying repetition. Regarding your writing, in general I like such stories and therefore notice quite a few cons that you could emphasize. The battles are very lean, and the character development is fast-paced. The same goes for the dialogues, which are trite and emotionless…There are also a lot of actions, events that have no logic... such as the watcher, which supposedly cannot be interfered with, and at the beginning it was shown how the contracts under his supervision were secure, but then it turned out that it was not so... which completely contradicts the concept, making this belief absolutely nonsensical. Chapter 291 Revealing The Truth, you say how he wanted to share the responsibility and that's why he trusts gamers he hasn't even seen live. You absolutely trashed your good idea with your organization, you could easily have built it based on mafia organizations or terrorist organizations. Not to mention that there are other secret organizations where they are in different circles. The more you reveal yourself to some, the more vulnerable you become...In order not to ramble on, I'll give some examples where you can see combat mechanics, dialogue, and the ability to keep the reader in suspense. For example Reverend Insanity and Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God. Of course even they are only a good attempt compared to true masters of fantasy, such as Steven Erickson or George Martin.
This novel starts off with a really strong hook and I was hella excited for where i thought it was heading. It seemed like a really interesting new type of management novel with some solid drama and characterization and the MC really came out strong and overcame difficulties to claw his way to a win and set up a path of success. And then everything after that is just effortless and completely overpowered and it turned into just another virtual reality game novel with the 'comedy' largely consisting of "haha wow look at the craaaaaaazy antics these epic memers get up to." The MC is just barely mentioned beyond having a reaction now and again, large sections of the novel now are just interactions between random npcs you don't care about making stale jokes from 10 years ago, there's only a very tenuous connection to internal consistency with how the author vaguely makes excuses why everything he does is absurdly overpowered, actions stop having consequences so its hard to care about any of the characters and you can never feel a sense of crisis...I suppose its still worth reading if you have nothing better to do but with how original the first couple chapters were and how cliche it turned out when the story just stopped focusing on the interesting bits.... It almost seems like they switched authors. Definitely worth a look in the first couple chapters but i wouldn't waste spirit stones on it.
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The first chapter had me hooked, I could not stop myself reading it. I'm not going to spoil anything for you it's up to you to read. Every word sent shiver down my spine. I kept reading just to see what happens next.
The plot had potential, but it was written pretty badly. They don't elaborate at all, and it skips around a lot. I got confused a lot. Characters were brought into the story randomly, so they had no background. The world background was confusing as well, because it started with the zombie apocalypse, but after a while, she was a demon and there were no zombies.
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