This is an interesting story and I thank you for writing it. The use of the odds was inspired but the use of the thieves was questionable to me. If you have something planned for them I look forward to it.
The first few chapters are good and interesting. It is tagged as a level up but starts off as a story and not a video game straight into action which I enjoyed.
700+ chapters in, and the highly anticipated identity revealed never occured. Translation drop badly around ch 450+. I just continue reading the raws just for the single, identity reveal and hoping the romance between FMC and MC to blossom. The series got dragged out too much with the plot of "Kill the son, brought out the father, kill the father, brought out the ancestor". Literally everyone knew how powerful and op MC was, except the FMC. Not really worth it to read after chapter 400+, not worth it
(Review 150 chapters+)Positives: The story is very good, with many intriguing mysteries, the real and virtual worlds are very interesting and the game system is great. It's very good to read, with a consistent pace. The story doesn't move too slowly or too fast. Negatives: At the beginning of the work, the author abuses the status window a lot, sometimes unnecessarily. But then he fixes it. I think the care and jealousy of the protagonist's family is too exaggerated. The fascination and adoration the girls feel towards the MC is also exaggerated. SUPER NEGATIVE (ROMANCE - WITH SPOILER): In my opinion the author is making a huge mistake with the relationship between the protagonist and Amanda. She has always loved the protagonist, always wanted his good and cares about him. When the MC unfairly became angry with her because of the incident, she continued to love him, always tried to talk to him and suffered alone for a long time. And after the MC finds out the truth, he friendzones her. He loved her and now the author wants to end it all. Whyyyyy?? On the other side is Luna. The protagonist interacts with her 3 times and in these 3 times the time they interact is a few hours. But that's already being enough to want to arouse feelings for her. DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! and it's unfair to Amanda. Sorry for any mistakes. Google translate.
The story is good the only thing I feel is that the chapter r kinda short maybe a few hundred words more The author is very interactive with the audience He asks for suggestions & if we don't understand any part of the chapter....Join the discord guys, what r u waiting for!!!
Quite nice but the enemies are too OP and he is too weak rn so plz make him OP too.You r a boss!!!!!!!!!😉😉😉😉😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😏😏😏😏🙃🙃🙃🙃😸😸😺😺😺👍👍👍👍🤜🤛
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