Average Mage wants to reach the Apex

the storyline was eye catching and the grammar was good

and most important was each chapter was extremely long... which sometimes makes me lazy to read but a great novel

great idea ruined by the simple fact the mc keeps trying to be s mage and not a cultivator poorly executed ides...I love the whole mage being reborn into a cultivation world and being a cultivator but being a mage in a cultivation world is just plain dumb and stupid

Alright, here’s my comprehensive review!
Writing Quality- a solid 7/10, really good, although there are quite a few grammatical errors + small things like ‘phoenix’ instead of phoenix, but those could be resolved pretty easily, and the author actually does it when you let him know in chap comments.

Updating Stability- The first chap was 6 days ago, the novel has 20 chapters. I give 5 stars for updating daily, so extra points too.

Story Development- Surprisingly good. Cliche done right. The only thing im worried about is Arrogant young masters, 6/10

Chara Design- 9, the siblings’ interactions are fun to watch, and the princess actually is interesting.

World BG- There has been close to nothing on it yet, the default I give when that’s happened is a 4/5

The books got a decent start. I love how the author leaves us every chapter with a question that keeps us curious.

The story looks promising. the description and the elaboration makes h imagine the story in front of ur eyes.

Great story line.

all the best author.