Average Mage wants to reach the Apex

the story is nice to read with interesting developments but well here comes the problem...after so much time all the heroines have become much stronger a ..and that's good ..but why the f**k is the mc still weak...he had so much time but barely improved..the author has purposely weaken the mc so as to display the awesomeness of the heroine but the mc is a massive turn off to read ....not to mention his simp like character ....the plot is good ..the interactions are good but the mc...is a disappointing trash..

love the novel and characters. Female characters are a bit obsessed over him but it's good that they are not totally yandere.

This is a good story. Too bad the story is in the initial stages only. I am really looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Author, keep up the good work.

It's not easy finding a good novel these days. It has good grammar and the flow of the story is also good, like hella good. Everything is reasonable that you can't really complain and make you want to read more.

The issue of whether its harem or not... this is just my opinion, since I'm already quite attached to the well-made characters, I'm kinda hoping that it is a harem, I don't want this to be like a japanese anime where the freaking MC don't choose a girl.

ANYWAY, 28 out of 10. lol

P.S. Thanks for your hard work, and please work harder for more chapter (no pressure).

First of, great work author, interesting storyline, and well-written chapters( spotted no grammar error) even though I just started reading, I'm already hooked, I really like how the first chapter was written, the author has done such a great job at designing the characters too. So keep up the good work author. I'm sending you my best wishes.

TL:DR, Just another chinese cultivation trash that may or may not be worth your time.

First thing is the cover, if you want to attract more readers, then either get rid of the text, or make the text readable, because you're gonna miss a lot of readers scrolling down quickly on their phones that way.


Next is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is okay, not the best, but not the worst, a solid 4 stars. There are a lot of typos and grammatical errors, but it is still readable and a flow is still established that doesn't break the reader's concentration. (I don't know how you did it! I mean, I can notice all the mistakes, and there are a lot a lot and I mean a lot, but it doesn't take away from the reading experience for some reason? I'm really, really confused right now.)

The stability of updates isn't able to be measured right now, so it's a solid 4 stars.

After is story development which is a splendid 5 stars. Honestly, the way the story is developing is very engaging, as mentioned above, and I just can't get enough of the story. A really good job author! The only thing I have for the author is that I am waiting for a unique twist to the story, something that I haven't read about before, as all the events that have happened before have already been used by other authors.

Character design is also stellar, 5 stars. I love the way the siblings interact and I just can't get enough of their cuteness. It's honestly incredible how you wrote their interactions, not too much, but not too little conversation either, it's just right. Again, like the story development, I am just waiting for the uniqueness in the characters, as their relationship and their designs are again, something that other authors have used already.

Finally is world background, a solid four. This is just because the world is really cliche at this point. I am once again waiting for the uniqueness that the author will come up with for the world, as it is just a normal cultivation world right now.

Overall, I would have said it was a highly recommended read, except for all the errors in the writing. I definitely recommend you get an editor, or somebody to proofread your chapters as to lessen the mistakes.

So, in the end, it's a novel that I would recommend casually, in passing. Not something so great, but that might just be because I place a heavy emphasis on spelling and grammar.

Great Job!

Good novel just the sister and brother relationship is weird and how the author hints at the romance between them is disgusting anyway everything is good but shame the author has these ideas

also if the novel Mc was the girl from the cover that would be fun but hey that's just me