Author Reincarnated as Villain

I laid there for a while as my mind began to clear up. There was this nice feeling of a gentle breeze. The humidity was just enough to make me feel comfortable. And last but not least, that unique, distinguished scent of earthy chemical compound, the smell of ammonia...

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A man with a light silver hair takes notice of those words and looks at the child while speaking, "speaking of that, why do you have the princess in your arm's, this is the first I've seen you ever holding a child, and I must say, it actually matches you" the man smirks at the last of his words.

Auria looks at the food with drool coming out the corner of her mouth. "Thank you so much, Mom! Let's eat now. I don't think I can handle waiting for much longer." Auria rushes over to her normal chair and waits for her parents to join her.

"Now go propose her, I'm sure she'll say yes. Go! " I kind of kicked him out from my apartment but gently.

As the sun dimmed down, so did the life of old man Lan.

Wanda watched as his breathing grew shallow, his eyes becoming unfocused as he looked up into the sky. Speaking passed the blood filling his mouth, he muttered, "I always wanted to go see the world. To see the ocean. You know I always wanted to run on water. But now…now…"

i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting.In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that.He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid)He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not.Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was?I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.

I guess the only problem I have is that sometimes it get a bit confusing when he's talking about past events that happened in the previous life he had but overall it's one of the better novels I've read and can't wait to read more

Loved and Really enjoyed it so far but Please finish the chapters I’d prefer to read a completed book I hate having to wait for a few chapters a week and hate privilege chapters too so please finish soon