It’s a decent novel but it uses overly complicated terminology that turns a good novel into one that’s about as interesting as casually reading a dictionary.
I guess it would have been great if you have divided paragraphs into multiple parts, it would have been easier to comment and read.Please use " text " for what people are speaking.Use ' text ' for inner thoughts.Use [ text ] for system replies.And please decrease the usage of word LOL.I feel story would have been great if it isn't overly OP at start, I like OP characters but the MC here is overly OP, he has 40 dragon eggs and 3 dragons within 10 chapters and he has Harry Potter cast too with him.
He sped away but he tore a part of his cloak in haste as a branch clung through the scruff of his collar as he tried to dodge a boiling blast of water from the chimeraan.
uh whats with the cheese man,the guy is practically went from bad ass hero to a kid playing hero.Goes to show how immature spiderman was huh Im think i hate the kid now.
Emmanuel drove down to his friends house because he felt Sonia might come looking for him at home and for now he doesn't have an answer for why he did what he did. On getting to his friends place the door was locked because there was nobody at home so he decided to call his friend and ask where he is "hello Collins where are you? am in front of your house but your door is locked " " Emma you didn't tell me you were coming I went down to the grocery store to get something I will be there in the next 15mins" " "OK get some food if u don't have any at home because I will be spending the night at your place " "OK ". Collins replied and ended the call. Emmanuel decided to sit inside d car and wait for Collins arrival.
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