i can see that the author made made efforts on editing the first chapters. this author also made the story slow progressed, which i didnt like. but i got usdd to it as i read. he was nerfed, i hate it but it was explined why he chosed to be nerfed. tuere were plenty of weird and uncommon development thay thought as a plothole, but after few reading, i realized there was a reason. the story is still ongoing so these so called plothole isnt final. so far i like it.
I realy like it .but he always getting more and more skills and the writer doesn't explin about them at al and the one the explin are not always working like it should. like there is a skill the help him know everything in his 8 meter radios and somehow he always getting attacked by supisre
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Another 'Global Survival' type story. This one isn't great. The MC keeps going around and breaking things to obtain materials. Thing is... he doesn't have very many blueprints. Wow, congrats on obtaining 30 threads from decomposing a bed. Nicely done! But... where are you going to sleep?
Nice plot. Read something different after a while. The story is developing in a goob way. The characters are described well but the surrounding should be addressed a bit more. This is a good novel overall. So would love to read more.
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Quite an interesting concept, definitely new to all the systems, cultivations, and other type of novels in this platform.Let's see how this will work out.
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