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i hate system who give's quest which failure means death or any penalty. instead of guiding him it's forcing him. he doesn't even need that system with his past experience, worst of all their is a death penalty 'what a joke'
The story has a good plot and decent development. Though there are a few time skips it doesn’t give you everything at once which overloads the reader. The writing style is also pretty good. The author is kind enough to take suggestions from the readers which is an added bonus. The only issue would be the occasional grammar mistakes. Considering how often they update ad that they do it on their own plus the length of the chapters I’m surprised it’s minor things like plurals ever now and then which shows the author is good at writing.
Really okay. I liked it. Early on so it is hard to tell where it will go? I do like how you can see how much care is being put into this story. Really good. Keep it up.
One more review closer to extra chaps :). Anyways check out the review by Bird of Paradise which basically drew me into this novel. From the first chapter it hooks you in, and the further you read, the more the novel coils it’s slippery grasp around you. I’ll definitely be following this novel closely. Goo job author!
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