Ashes of the Abyss

It's really bad, I'm trying to read this, but I can't. I know it's a translation, but it still sounds like RAW. The story has a lazy narrative where everything is told directly and nothing is shown to us, the dialogues are weird. Not to mention that if Laila was replaced by a male character, it wouldn't make any difference.

okay so the writing quality and details are perfact i read two chapters and I think it's great no flows from my side

ohmegashhh!!! I'm sooooo rooting for this story! I hope you update more frequently author chop chop 😘