Ashen Host

if I could give it less, I would. The damning nationalism is rather disgusting and extremely off putting. I understand that authors are often forced to put in nationalism as a way to placate their dictatorship but I recommend that they try to limit it as much as they can.

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THOS LOOKS JUST PLAIN OLD STUPID!!! I REALLY HOPE NO ONE READS IT!!

I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!

When I'm reading the synopsis going to the other chapters I can say that this book is interesting. I love fantasy and I'm gonna recommend you to read this🤗🤗Kudos author_👏👏

(Lexa)

Terrence started to scratch his head and turned his eyes away from Miray, "Let's get married for six months and then we divorce later.."

Mira looked at the last shafts of sunlight falling into her pale pink color coordinated room. The soccer posters on the walls, and electric keyboard that say next to the windowsill.