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story development can be better, can have more depth in character building and it's  makes better quality story.

Good Novel. I'll see how it will approach its neighbouring countries

Absolute peak fiction written by the goat himself. Also tsukasa, it doesn't matter that I am slow when I was THE FIRST READER of this novel.

The story is magnificent and characters are introduced and explained well. The world background is also excellent and the power system is interesting.I would give it a five star if not for the horrible punctuations. I mean yeah, it's just full stops and commas interchanged in most places, but that changes a lot and makes the read inconsistent I really hope it improves in the latter chapters because I'm giving my review at chapter 10.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

[You have killed 4/10 goblins.]

"Selamat datang di rumah, Sayang! Apakah kamu mau makan malam, mandi atau aku?"Marina mengatakan kalimat yang sepenuhnya klise itu, untuk apa?Kali kedua bulan ini?Saya yakin kami melakukan ini rata-rata dua kali sebulan.

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