A good story with good pacing, there's always a daily update, and the author informed us if he can't update or something comes up, not ghosting us like some who do thatkeep up the good work author!
This story has a lot of potential but i’ve found there are a few things that somewhat squander it. The ‘system’ has been extremely annoying and controlling so far, and i get there’s some buildup for a twist or something but im 50 chapters in and almost every single instance of growth feels almost useless within sometimes less than a chapter; it feels extremely unsatisfying to follow the main character. I can see there are a bunch of threads being laid out for some big reveals later down the line, but i’m personally not looking forward to them because every single ‘big reveal’ so far has not felt like it matters that much. I still rated this 4 stars because I think everything besides character design and some of the story development is phenomenal.
It seems to be somewhat of a tradition here for authors to rate their own works, so I'm shamelessly going to follow that tradition. I hope you'll enjoy my novel, it's my first work ever, so might not be perfect, but it's meant to just be an enjoyable action story.Much love to everyone who gives it a chance!
If you're looking for something light and fun, this one is for you. It's very reminiscent of old cartoon super hero comics/shows.If you enjoyed reading and watching that type of content when you were young then I advise you try this one out.
First three chapters and I'm absolutely hooked. It has been a while since I've read a BL Novel and this serves. 🙌🏻 The way Docaqui writes magnetizes me to just continue scrolling through the chapters, wishing there were more uploaded chapters. Well — gotta let this marinate for a bit. ✨🎀
This is a strong foundation for a dark fantasy/dystopian world with rich storytelling potential. The world background is well built. The author made it seem like easy but the suspense is hard to catch. Looking forward to it.
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