Ascension of the Outlander

in cultivation type novel ..there is a difference in immortal cultivator and  mortals..not only in strength..but also intelligences and thinking.a young cultivator thinking and intelligence exceed  ordinary mortal of same age .this logic is missing in this novel.characters behave too childish mc portrayed as too dumb ..like he can not speak up is mind only complain in his head.he does not like attention.but in some scene he thinks why no body is looking at me?.. MC can comprehend every thing and any thing but first he need to compared how to talk is mind out. and a bit of intelligenceFL  character is too irritating ,brainless,very lustfully, its OK to portrait her as loli but there is limit to it.author need to be mature.story can be great if author can take care of certain thing while portraying the behavior of the characters. otherwise reader will lose interest .what is use if plot is powerful but character behave silly

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I don't know who copied who or if it is the same author with a different pseudonym, but this novel is 95% similar to Animal assassin group. It doesn't even try to be anything worth while.Please webnovel, add quality control.

one of the stupidest MC. I tried to read more cuz it was a bit unique but the stupidity of the mc prevented me. You can give it a try if you dont mind a stupid mc.

Shameless review by the author.My sincere apologies, this is to inform you that...I was finding that things were not going right so I had deleted chaps from 17 onwards.I want any one who stop by hidden door could enjoy it to fullest.I hope my effort could bring you joy and another good experience.This is my first novel please spare your reviews and share your thoughts and shower your support through power stones.

Mashallh. Nice novel. Congratulations for yahya nizar. Love this novel. Everyone vote for this.👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏May Allah bless him.🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲

An embarrassing school slice-of-life power fantasy. Emotional age of whoever wrote this is around 12. It actually started out okay, but later it regressed more and more. Oh and of course MC always "smiles

Inside was a huge man with his skin was already colored black. There were metal spikes pierce through both his hands and feet. His long disheveled hair already reaches the ground and his beard reaches his legs. Although his appearance looks miserable, there was still an unknown aura radiating from him.