Ascension of the Devouring King

Naruto finally stopped giggling as he spoke to the two "Alright, from now on, never say those words again. If you are a part of my clan, then you are family, and there are no subservences in family." Haku smile and Zabuza let out a sigh of relief. "Well, stay here for now, I'm going to go order new clothes." The two nodded as Naruto walked out and he could swear he heard with his new and improved hearing "Zabuza-sama, help me start cleaning! Its too dusty in here, we might get sick!" and a very annoyed moan of anguish.

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As you can see by the amount of votes i was a fan of this novel unfortunately the author is dishonest about the content of the novel, he is shackled by the same cliche and disgusting incel behavior thay majority of authors on webnovel suffer.There would be absolutely no freaking problem if he said in either the tags or comments what the story would be.But he lied and made it seem like it’s a revenge story with a puppet king who takes back his rightful throne.Which didn’t happen the mc is a pathetic little twirp who feels guilty for the girls who betrayed him and wants to help and save them.

hope you continue this novel because it is great

Overall not great but not horrible. Now the reason I came to my conclusion: writing quality no major errors noticed, strangely used opinions by mc that have no connection ([example] thoughts based on ideals of groups or organizations that do not exist in the current world), story development feels very slow and often times can be set aside without feeling a sense of urgency to prolong reading, character design is left mainly in nondiscription with few details about characters given, world background is only given to the reader in a sense of novel title otherwise no towns, city, forest, country, road, home is ever named directly (within the first 30 chapters locations that can be given life or even a name are countable with one hand). To finalize everything, novel is hit and miss

Its a good story in si fi, the character Veer is a awesome boy, who gradually improve and make sutable in the planet titan.Its a good story in si fi, the character Veer is a awesome boy, who gradually improve and make sutable in the planet titan.