Ascension Of The Dark Sword

So far so good, in comparison to the previous story I can see some clear improvement, I also like how the author is always quick to update his stories. The writing quality is great but can be improved. Overall very solid novel so far, I’m really invested. I hope the author keeps up the hard work they are putting in.

pretty good for a first start, author pretty much improved with all the suggestions previously given in their old book

Writing quality needs a bit more work, and the story development too, i need to see more to change my mind, other than that love this novel and would highly recommend

Im so excited what gonna happen next. #fallinlovetoSteven

This book was my favorite of all fanfic I've read...

looking forward to the coming chapters

Part 1 was amazing I love all the characters in both parts. Thank you for including part 2 in this book I just could not get enough or all the characters and I look forward to the next one to find out more about everyone.

Great read. Well written..had a few errors but that's to be expected. The main character had tantrums but she was not portrayed as annoying but more endearing, which I really liked. When they become annoying, it really turns me off the book. But all the characters' development was top notch. Bravo!!