𝐖𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐐𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐲: 5/5. Super good, there are mistakes here and there, but those are minimal, almost to the point you can count them in one hand.𝐔𝐩𝐝𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐛𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐲: 5/5. no need to say anything about this, the author said it in the synopsis.𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐩𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭: 5/5. So far so good, you can see the character development as you get farther into the story.𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐠𝐧: 5/5. At the start, the character was weak willed, and physically weak. However, as the story progressed, the mc changed and became better than his past self (wont say much cuz I don’t wanna spoil it). people complained that the mc was too weak and naïve and other stuff, even I complained (on my other account, AncestralDragonGod, forgot the password so I can’t login (╥_╥)), however, I still chose to continue reading the novel as I wanted to see its end, and I can say I am not disappointed by how the story has progressed up until now.𝐖𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤𝐠𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝: 5/5. Perfect. Just, perfect.
I love this Kingdom building web novel. The world building and character development is amazing and realistic. A MC can’t just use his modern knowledge to quickly create a kingdom, create fire arms and take over the world. I love how creating a blast furnace create political and economic problems. I love how religion plays a major role in creating “common sense” / describing what’s right or wrong. I love how the Mc makes mistakes and isn’t perfect. Like winning every war. Throughout the novel, the MC is also depicted as an intelligent and lustful man. However, woman can be dangerous. I’m glad that the author recently address this situation. Perhaps, now the Mc will become acute when facing woman. This novel is amazing. Slowly building up the technology latter and adding new reforms. I love it.
I'll change my review once it comes out, but I have expectations for this. Chances are that among all the other rubbish you can find gem. I hope this novel won't disappoint me and everyone else.The idea is a bit old, but you don't really see monk centered novels here on Qidian, so that's a first.
This is a good book. It's excellently done. The writing quality is superb. As a fan of litrpg, one couldn't but root for the young Mia. Her character really fitted her role and the world building around her is on point. Great job.
first time writing reviewthe story and atmosphere is over all good but I don't like mc coz?that simple he isn't a human hero type person he have what it take to be hero but don't have hearts of a hero to sacrifice everything for the greater good. character development is going on but that all I can say for now.
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