ASCENDANT OF THE ETERNAL FLAME

-Asylum-

constanly ends words with an s instead of ed sometimes multiple times in the same paragraph, making the entire first chapter feel incredibly difficult to read as if written by a 5 yr old.

Hey! Ahem...uh...well, shameless author ☆☆☆☆☆ review here (-_-). Being an author, I would not hesitate to recommend my creation and also hope that it will live up to your expectations. I will try my best to improve as much as I can so that I deliver a great piece of work to you, my dear readers.Any constructive criticism is welcomed, but no personal abuse is welcomed here...well, I know some of you gonna do that anyway (>_<). Thanks for reading my yapping and I hope you enjoy the book (•_•)

I love the world building and character development. Its well written and it’s a great story overall. I’m surely adding it on my collection.