ASCENDANT OF THE ETERNAL FLAME

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Worldbuilding was pretty weak. It really only involves two nations. It’s fine but with a war between two countries you would think other nations would be involved. It’s a weak nitpick but the world does feel a little stale like that. A lot of schemes don’t pay off well. Like too much stuff happens that doesn’t pay off in a meaningful way because the real plan was something else entirely. And a lot of stuff gets hyped up like the abyss sword but it goes nowhere. I don’t think the dragon sword gets reforged either.Ending was super rushed. All in all the world feels empty, and the story is confusing and unsatisfying.

great story with a developed plot.  mc has a clear goal and is trying his hardest to get there.  a bit of a dungeon crawler and action filled.

Thia book is golden,no freaking doubts at all

"Ah?" Why would he thank me? I should be the one thanking him.

Ciel: humph.

"Idiot, I said extravagant not exotic! How could you confuse the two!"

It instantly sprang to the direction of the small object, it rapidly envelopes the object as if it was starving then it was driven down the earthen soil, the liquid gradually disperses as the ground fill the hole that was caused by me.