Artificial Abyssal

I revealed all this thing to Arun and Vinay after they returned. They were into investigation mode.

"You son of a bitch," He threw another punch but Eddie dodged and caught him around the waist and took him down before punching his head and knocking him out.

HP       150/150  (you heath 20 points per min)

I felt a tension between us, but I decided to ignore it. I didn't like that feeling of hope when there was none, they always left in the end.

"The Fire Sage I presume?"

Planet Namekusei;

Ica tersenyum puas lalu menjatuhkan dirinya di pecahan-pecahan kaca itu sehingga tangannya yang tidak tertutup jaket berdarah dan wajahnya juga banyak yang tergores, Ica berdiri sambil meringis dan tersenyum.

" If I accept it ? who will taking care of my pokemon ?"

It was their responsibility to handle souls who wanted revenge or their regrets fixed before their next reincarnation. It certainly wasn't his job to deal with it. But now, as he hung like a weightless sack of meat in space, it was his.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"Are you the highest?" Dahyun asked.

Good writing quality but way to much information is given without anything moving the plot forward at all. Give it a try I guess but don’t expect to understand or not be overwhelmed by information.