The author here was a great story ,some story developement and character developement , the only think that i didnt like was the dinamic between the female lead and the male lead, this is my opinion and is biased because i hate josei(i dont know what is called the reverse of this instead of being the female lead weak is the male lead) type of storys and this story feels like this, if i was the mc and had the chance to run away from the female lead i would run, i will continue reading because the author does a great job to make me entretained through the story, but i expect some developement from the male lead.
Tried to be somewhat honest here.
Love the story so far up to chapter 40.
I do have some things that irk me but let's start off with it's a perfect setup. love the twist and laughed at brother making a move. overall is a new take on something I haven't seen done and I really can't wait to see how it works out.
now the bad things.
like this post the grammar is not the best and some words are missing here and there. but I don't care much about it because Im worse.
the overall mc is kinda a big baby. he acts like he has no social skills with the female lead but he can act and talk fine to everyone else. he gets uncomfortable and acts a certain way that just doesn't come across as his normal character. now it can be overlooked but it's very noticeable and in many guy roles the character just doesn't fit. perhaps more of a build up and backstory or maybe a reason why he acts in a certain way with her. but when you have another female mentioned from school and he plays paintball with 8 friends... you know his social skills are not that lacking.
for the female lead I think she's very pushy and wants to be a man and as you see she's doing it because the role she is in. there is reasons and it works and maybe some backstory? who knows just keep making those chapters.
in all if you can spare to read this ugly post of mine then you can read this book. I give it 4 stars and I hope to see more.
One question before I start, is this a novel about mc being stepped on and bullied by his wife and is weaker than her? If so then please give a heads up
If your looking for a good romance and don't have a problem with the girl being the lead in the relationship I would definitely recommend it. This book quickly got me hooked, I have not noticed any errors in the writing and the character development is amazing. I am currently on ch 45 and my only comment is I hope that the author doesn't get so caught up in Sam's character growth they forget about Lena(this has not been a problem so far)
The grammar and typos make this a slightly annoying read. The nicknames are cringe. The FL isn’t really my cup of tea in terms of her behavior. Admittedly, I did drop this book early because I was just unable to get into it, so I don’t know if the story gets better.
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Love the story so far up to chapter 40.
I do have some things that irk me but let's start off with it's a perfect setup. love the twist and laughed at brother making a move. overall is a new take on something I haven't seen done and I really can't wait to see how it works out.
now the bad things.
like this post the grammar is not the best and some words are missing here and there. but I don't care much about it because Im worse.
the overall mc is kinda a big baby. he acts like he has no social skills with the female lead but he can act and talk fine to everyone else. he gets uncomfortable and acts a certain way that just doesn't come across as his normal character. now it can be overlooked but it's very noticeable and in many guy roles the character just doesn't fit. perhaps more of a build up and backstory or maybe a reason why he acts in a certain way with her. but when you have another female mentioned from school and he plays paintball with 8 friends... you know his social skills are not that lacking.
for the female lead I think she's very pushy and wants to be a man and as you see she's doing it because the role she is in. there is reasons and it works and maybe some backstory? who knows just keep making those chapters.
in all if you can spare to read this ugly post of mine then you can read this book. I give it 4 stars and I hope to see more.