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The premise would have been good if not for the recurring stupid characters and forced plots that happen solely for the mc. Such as being disdained literally by breathing air. And the "coincidental" examination of disciples of which the mc partakes and dominates. What's even ridiculous is that the supposed "geniuses" were nothing but characters with no depth, purely made to act as a pedestal for the mc's glory. They saw the mc easily dealing with the prior opponent but they still underestimate him, it would have been better if they at least have been a little more cautious, but no, they instead fought to be the first to fight the mc calling him "prey." I understand that the mc's abilities have to be showcased every now and then but please, don't do it in a very ludicrous way. Even a toddler would be cautious to a certain degree once a situation takes a turn from what was otherwise expected. In summary, add more depth to the characters and don't force events for the convenience of the mc like "an event that only happens for a century" or "a village attacked out of nowhere, and the mc is put in the position of defending." Make a clear outline of what the characters are, their personalities, abilities, and such. It will help make the characters appear unique among others instead of the usual "opposing and worshipping characters" where they either worship, oppose, or some "ice-cold super genius woman that frowns upon men but was taken aback by the mc's strength hence falls head over heels" cliché. Make the story a little more alive, that's all I'm asking.
We walked into the lunch court and there were a ton of people there were all kinds of people but I felt all of them staring at me I could feel there eyes on the back of my head just to get them to stop I turned around and winked I thought to myself I could get use to this I went and got lunch I got a whole bowl of chicken and rice me and my brothers sat down at a table and we ate until this idiot who looked a year older then me or two came up and put his arm around I was in shock and I heard my brother say "I would move or you might lose a limb" the guy laughing said "you want to try me whimp" I had enough I flipped him right the table and he slammed against the floor and started coughing I grinned and looked at everyone and said "dont touch me without my permission" everyone looked at me in shock i dropped my plate of food on him and told max and calub "it's time to go" everyone started to whisper behind us I didn't really care I didn't even get a close look at the guy all I knew was he was a big kid a pain in the ass if I say so myself he was part reptile was all I could catch max said "I'm surprised that is all you did I though he was gonna at least bleed" I replied "I don't want to scare them to much and we can count that as a practice round" the bell finally rang then I had P.E class next at least I didn't have to listen to a old person talk for two hours straight to my luck max and calub weren't in this class and guess who was the pretty boy from earlier this was going to be a great time
She sat on the patch of still-dewy grass and concentrated, pulling the light and dark energies around her. Yesterday, when she got home, she began testing areas where her elements are most abundant. As she was going around the neighborhood feeling the concentrations of energies, she serendipitously found out that it was the time of the day that determines when both her elements will be abundant at the same time.
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