Arcane Academy: Rise of the Side Character

"What sir?"

This is a tale of love, healing & the machinations of the Gods.The romance between Aleysia and Medusa grows with an intensity born of two souls who have been broken in different ways but find healing in each other’s arms.

This book is good. The characters are awesome. however the author repeats the end of the chapter and begins the same at the beginning of the chapter. The author also tends to repeat the term when the person talks a specific way in a specific type of tone. another problem is names don't always need to be stated in a sentence, if you follow along you know it's that person.  Other than these minor problems the story is great the plot is good. I really like the characters too.

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?