Need improvement in all aspect...beside explaining the level of cultivation...author should've explain what is yang cultivator/yin cultivator in early part of the story...and dont make the male mc more stunning than female please...dont make it sound like yaoi novel...its disgusting
Love this new story. Hope the story being picked. It's my first time writing for some novel being picked up. 🤩😍😍😍😍 Lately I found novels with similar plots, so they become boring for me. But this one is different. Finally something refreshing and get me hooked. Finger crossed the story being picked.
It started with the calling MC trash nonsensical face slapping within the first few chapters. I’m not optimistic that it’ll get better.I’m pretty sure there’s better cultivation stories with genes as a system.
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