I read to chapter 90 and I started reading for NSFW and fantasy so when he made rail gun it wasn't that great. Then the numbers were just wrong just thousands of newtons can't blow up a whole mountain. The grammar is bad, but my grammar is bad also so I don't mind it as much as others.
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engages I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
I'd like the way you write the first chapter how everyone he live turned their backs on him because of his defective stats as a royal truly shows how a person holding power would do if they see someone who is not even worth noticing
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