The author is not a true master of increasing word count endless foreshadowing, but this work could be an attempt at a doctorate. He literally repeaters the same thing over and over.
somehow i dont feel the anti hero vibes on mc. i feel the villain vibes more on the heroes. it feels contradictory tbh. it was nice though but it was a let down that such old man died and mc has no reaction. technically the old man was the first person that made the mc feel warm at least he has been kind. i was expecting more when it says anti hero tag but so be it. 3.4 for now. reason? the writing is average but still better than any novel (4)story development (i really cant feel thr villain vibes although mc is smart) (3)character design (technically, each of their character development is good but not better because mc was quite naive. he easily trust too much despite being bullied all his life (trust me, I'm a victim of bullying and i know pretty much their mindset. they wont trust too much) updating stability is better, good job! (4) as for world background, you did not state what their world was in. why is their heroes and villain and how such powers came to be so it lacks info. btw some of your plots are forced upon mc so it adds up to the rating.
Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito,espero que continue assim
Hello author, nice novel, but I don't like the part where some characters can jump over realms like our MC, I understand genius or something, but in some cases people object to several cultivation realms above them (not about the MC) and the general thing generally speaking, they are described as five-star geniuses. This is in my opinion to be improved.
Wtf...... Kidnapped a little girl and raped the father. .. what the fafafaafafkkkkk.......omy why that fak is the limit 140 char and does Chinese women have a fetish for CEO husbands? And reverse harems don't the guys feel grossed out using the same hole used by other man... That's borderline gayyyyy... Is the 140 limit over yet????
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