Apocalyptic disaster, seize an aircraft carrier as a base

Quality light novel ruined by a poor translator. The person seems to directly translate: conjunctions and punctuation included. This results in many awkward sentences with commas that make them grammatically incorrect.

Read until chapter 86. (The last one released)Writing Quality: English is not my native language, so I don't have much basis for an opinion on that, but with my level of English I didn't find any errors that interfered with my reading.Update stability: Every day there is a new chapter, in addition to several extra chapters, I have nothing to complain about.Story development: At some points I feel it gets a little repetitive, sometimes the chapter is just about his routine with a slight difference from something that happened in one of his businesses, but the story is so satisfying that I don't prevented me from reading at all.Character Design: Looks a lot like anime character personalities to me, a lively girl, an ice cold older girl, a cute and loving younger sister. There's no way to complain.World Background: I loved how he presented the differences between the parallel world and our world, even explaining historical implications between the countries of the story world.In the end, a clean 5 Stars review.

Half the story At this point didnt even include the mc.                                                                                       

In a world where Creators exist somehow the only plot that the author has is kids fighting for some chick and making the first 2 chapters just to establish that we know that he has potential but everyone else thinks he is trash. ....In ResumeThis is a Standard Chinese novel, I wouldn't expect anything good to come from this in future chapters.

I didn't expect to find a book where the author actually explains what qi could be and doesn't use plotarmor in a vague way like cultivation works because of qi and qi is qi. I like how the author thinks and didn't find obvious mistakes in the math and science parts. there are a few minor points that could lead to a strong power creep between the later stages if you consider that core cultivators can already destroy mountains from a distance but it should be fine if he stops the exponential growth he currently has between the stages. sure fighting higher stages should be almost impossible but it shouldn't be 1000 vs 1 that is one stage higher and the one is winning without problems or getting hit. at least after the core stage where everyone knows techniques and has a good amount of qi.but that is just me rambling about things that are hard to balance and would be normally readjusted over time while writing  but because it is WN and we read the first version, the author has to think more about thinks like that because it is so hard to rewrite entire scenes or plot points.

Anthony.... Reborn as an Ant.... Ok. That right there is so bad. Thats gotta be the worst pun I've ever fucking seen out of all the novels ive seen on this site, and I fucking love it.

Hurriedly putting on as little makeup as she can, she messed up the eyeliner she was rushing to put on when her mother told her it was a quarter 'til eight p.m. Sonja was supposed to get to the address provided in the email at eight o'clock and it would take about ten minutes to get there, longer if traffic was bad, and it was often really bad in L.A. Cursing under her breath so her mother would hear, Sonja used some concealer to fix the mistake, finished her semi-decent eyeliner, grabbed her mother's gold clutch that she was borrowing for the night, snatched the keys from the dining table, slipped on gold heels, also from her mother, got to the old car that her family got not too long ago, and drove as fast as she could to the address. She was pretty sure she ran a few red lights, but at this point, she was too anxious to care.

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