Nothing like a mad scientist with some good allies and some plot armor but for a greater good!The beginning (15+chapters) is of a lower quality but keep going, you will be pleased, great world and a good mc await you, and when I say a good mc, is the quality because here when have a anti hero done wright!
writing: 3. mistakes are seen from time to time but not too bad. the writing also doesn't feel immersive due to the extremely fast pace and makes a reader skim through most of the chapters.stabliity: 5. almost impossible to go low to be honest. author says 1ch/week or 1 ch/month and delivers means updates are stable. This area is basically for boosting ratings.story:2. would have been a 3 or 4 but things just move so damn fast. before we even learn much about one thing we are already moving on. story is developing but its developing way too damn quickly. starts in a village and a couple chapters later he in an academy and a couple after that he is in a maze.... we didn't even get to explore much of the area before we moved on.character design: 2. would have given it a 4 to be honest but pace is far too quick...so fast that characters don't really develop. The main character gets op far too quickly.. although it may be intentional. Also due to the extreme pace, we don't see the main character developing on the emotional side and on the few instances where it is highlighted, it just feels too forced. other characters basically don't exist. they are just there. Bland, one dimensional and easily forgettable characters that don't matter at all.world background:2, barely anything about the world is explained due to the extremely fast pace. scenes are being jumped around far too quickly. power levels don't even mean anything when MC just breaks through bottlenecks as if breathing. wait. it was as if breathing. power levels of side characters don't even matter because they are bland one dimensional forgettable mobs A, B, and C. they basically exist to be face slapped by how awesome MC is and become cannon fodder.My opinion:Extremely faced and that pace makes the story seem very forced as there isn't enough time to develop anything before we move on. some may like it as there is less bull**** and fillers but some may hate it as there isn't enough suspense building up and it is not immersive or exciting as things end before we get to that point.if you are the former, rejoice. if you are the latter, you have been warned. proceed at your own risk.
Fiery Moon's work is very entertaining, give it a chance and it will grow on you. The novel (at least in my opinion) has slight issues in regards to power scaling, however as you progress pacing will counteract that. Overall Immortal and Martial Dual Cultivation is a fun and unforgettable story.
such a confusing storyline. plot points are added then dropped so fast I question what I'm reading. the pacing of the whole story is just weird. Sometimes being fast sometimes being incredibly slow.
It's good i hope it get picked up. honestly the story is really interesting with nonhuman heroines (weapons) yeah it is unique because the mc power is basically like turning weapons into girls. this is suit my taste
I'm detecting "summoning the holy sword" and "the amber sword" vibes from the story ..all in all a very good story..looking forward to its release, my excitement has been stroked!!
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