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Obviously this isn't finished so I can't give it a comprehensive review, but so far the story is quite endearing. The title made me think that there would be a system that literally used apocalypses or something, but the system ended up being surprisingly tamer than that. It's definitely a "weak to hero" type of deal, which is nice in its own way. The pacing is a little off and the worldbuilding seems to be rushed in, but that's of little fault on the author's part considering he/she has only had a few short chapters to get things going and developed. The grammar is a little shoddy at times, but the story is definitely readable. Overall, I would say this story has potential and draws upon many of the common elements that make a cultivation story a popcorn read.
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