Yeah, so this book, is a test, please be honest but not brutal, this is not an Eminem song, i think it's good for a novel, so please tell me what you think of it.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you
Wow it's a better story in our coming world...cheak anything more about the story I find nothing without a future situation moment as the author created it.
Dropped at ch6.
Main reason - abysmal writing quality (2/5). Bland and ****** language I can stomack, its a light novel, not classical literature, but the way the Author uses punctuations is just... I have no words. I guess, he thinks you put comma wherever you pause in your speech, even if you pause to take breath. Or, more plausible explanation, his keyboard is malfunctioning and the comma key is jammed, firing on its own every now and then.
"he asked, Joe what was happening" <-- not even the worst, I've seen in one place he put comma after "the", like "think about the, level up function".
guy's you can also read my other novel. Ultimate Brain Evolution
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Main reason - abysmal writing quality (2/5). Bland and ****** language I can stomack, its a light novel, not classical literature, but the way the Author uses punctuations is just... I have no words. I guess, he thinks you put comma wherever you pause in your speech, even if you pause to take breath. Or, more plausible explanation, his keyboard is malfunctioning and the comma key is jammed, firing on its own every now and then.
"he asked, Joe what was happening" <-- not even the worst, I've seen in one place he put comma after "the", like "think about the, level up function".
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