Apocalypse Re-Birth: My Shadow Legion Conqured the Game World

This story is direct, concise, and focused. The writer writes every sentence with a purpose. These are usually strong elements of writing, and most stories fail in these areas, but not in this case. This story is like pure alcohol, it does it's job so well there's no room for flavor.I'm early in the story, so things may change later on, but in the beginning the main character never really has time to leave an impression. He does things, and things happen, but no particular attention is given to him as a character. Because of this, I lost interest in him.

hgy and I have a lot of other people who are soft for one girl who is a good friend and 3 in the arms of an assassin who is a good friend and a good one

Quite interesting. There's already enough world building in the first 2 chapters that you could already get the feel of the world view of the characters. Also the concept of Qi being discovered through a mutation is interesting. Qi has always been a concept that is capable of destroying worlds in various novels, and yet Qi in this novel seems like it's just a means to make life easier and live longer. Already a novel with great potential.

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"Ya aku mau berangkat dulu" Aku berjalan dihadapan ayah dan menyalami tanganya.

The one who had caused the explosion was All Might, and this was the first time Izuku had seen All Might not smiling in his hero form.

"What do you mean?" Sean asked.

Nowadays, she could walk but not run. The scars have also faded with only faint lines to show it was once there. It was not perfect, but the doctors promised that she could go back to normal life activities soon.