157 read. the hero has very, very, very small balls ... and the most useless character is vanessa. in addition to the promotion and the raid, it could (and even should) be left behind the scenes. and yes - there is too much "sugar" in the whole story))).
it's my first novel I'm not an expert and English is not my first language if you got ideas to make the novel better tell I also read the comments so if the readers don't like serting things do tell I will try to fix them
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