Another Doomsday: Carrying a House; Gaining a Cute Son and a Husband

what true masterpiece it's just mashup of all xianxia cliche , be unique for once

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It was good, but at the beginning when Wang Li was going to Bai Hua Fairy Sect, I think there was a typo where Gu Qing Shan was mentioned at the Sky Palace competition. The MC said at the beginning he will "use the cheat he gets

Generic. MC could be replaced by a pokemon and it wouldn't make a difference (like it can launch magic attacks, it has levels and practically just keeps repeating its name) not to mention the boring enemies it finds everywhere it goes. There's a girl in the story, or it could be a Ditto with a female name that's hard to say. The pokemon league must be somewhere in chapter twenty it must be when he starts hitting others before going to another continent to look for more people to hit.

translation quality took a nosedive after chapter 210. the story is very good. Although the MC is a bit too much of a simp at times, I'm enjoying this read quite a lot. mostly due to there being dungeons and game elements.

(Celeste)

Su bao...u are dead meat...

" Hey ! so what do you think boys are talking about " " they must be talking something perverted about us " " yeah I think so too " " whatever boys will be boys , they can't change their animals behaviours" when other girls heard that they all letout small laughs.