I would of gave this a 5 star but there are some problems like for example the misgendering of characters he/her also him/his when you mentioning a girl and characters description, like when you introduced a character it would be nice to describe how they look example hair color and so on and the mentioning of jutsu like“henge no jutsu” add a little description next to it (transformation jutsu) and for the same thing for the villages konohagure add (hidden leaf) that would be nice if you can fix these issues I read up to 24 chapters so idk if you fixed these issues in the later chapters but it should be nice to fix these issues in the older chapters too
I really enjoyed the first few chapters of this book! The storyline is intriguing, and the characters have already pulled me in. I can’t wait to see how everything unfolds, but I’ll hold off for now and wait for more chapters to stack up, this is definitely a story I want to binge-read!
cool martial art light novel, well writtrn story plot i like mc fighting art i sudjust to add system on it, add more humor to hook and attract reader i already add it on my collection book, so keep going and update daily.
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