the idea behind the story is okay. The way the story is told and presented to the reader is one of the worst I have seen in a long while. Plot armor so thick that it hides world building full of holes and inconsistencies, don't worry it maybe takes a couple of chapters to fully see how thick the plot armor is but once you do the broken world building is very obvious. The opponents are idiots and the main character is not much smarter. Everything that was put in to make the main character look cool feels so fake that the main character and his actions become a joke that is not funny
A good and interesting novel held back by pointless scenes and sudden drops in MC's IQ. The story is great and it's fun to see the 2 MCs change the world and get rich. Sadly, they don't always seem as intelligent as they should be considering their background in the real world. Writing quality is fine, though you might get irked by sudden mixing of 1st person and 3rd person in a few para. Good luck to the author.
The picture is cute...The picture is cute...The picture is cute..The picture is cute..The picture is cute.... IDK anything , i just knowThe picture is cute
The first 40 chapters are not bad. There is a lot to be wanted for sure, but they are readable. Once you get past chapter 40 that all goes away. As others have said, the translation is horrible and it looks like the story starts to fall apart. I can't tell you what to do, but if you want to waste 2 FP per chapter like I did, go ahead. I am putting this out there so others don't make that mistake out of curiosity.
Awesome book, incredibly well written and with a unique and different twist on the apocalypse setting. The main character is cool as a cucumber fortunately though, and I can't wait to see how he deals with everything as the situation and his own powers progress. Highly recommend this book, and hope any potential readers aren't deterred by the BL tag as while an important element, there is so much more to this story that's worth reading!
Grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it's a decent novel with an actual low key main character.there have been low key mcs before but the moment someone does'nt give them "face" it's over with being low key. i hope this character stays low key even when he gets stronger.writing quality: bad grammar but it is not unreadable.2.5 stars would mean average so I'll give you 2 starsstability of updates: no clue only 3 chapters are out. I'll give you half stars so 3.other things can't be judged with 3 chapters released.Character design: I'll give you 3 stars, until now the characters are pretty generic and except for the mc no other characters were properly introduced, but as i said i'm eager to see a low key mc.
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